Nice! Me likee!
Funny thing is that I like the beginning the best though hahahaha
Something about that beat is sickening. Maybe it's the energy it has. Maybe it's that little synth that comes in around 0:41, maybe it's that noise synth where the cutoff keeps changing.
In the second section, there are some things that could be adjusted a bit:
The main synth could be turned down a bit. It's just a bit too overbearing. Furthermore, that last melody's individual attack points should be brought out a bit more. For those parts with the fast attack, I would consider shortening the length of the note a bit, so that the note isn't coming back in right after another one leaves, especially since there isn't much decay, if any at all, on the synth.
I like the variation on the drumbeats on the end. Well, I have to say, I like the drums especially in this song.
All in all, I have to say that you're getting better and better as you go. One of my favorite things is to watch someone grow and improve.
And to answer your question, I actually did finish something. It's already on my profile. I decided to call it Revolution X, since it just sounded like a cool name.
Oh and I forgot to mention, nice name choice for this song.