Lol MillsApparatus.....
Don't know whether to laugh or cry in response to that guy....
Nevertheless, there is something off about this song that I can't put my penis- er I mean finger on....so I'll keep listening until I figure out what it is.
Nice violin playing, it pretty much shits on my abilities at the stringed instrument.
I got what's off with the song! Many places don't have a clear bassline instrument, so what happens is it sounds like it's on a different chord than it actually is. You might do well by putting a soft Dbass staccato as the bassline.
Also, the choir might be a tad bit too powerful.
And that sums up my review pretty much. Good work, and keep it up!