Whew, I thought it was gonna be pure techno....
Now I can actually do a good review
Chord prog: The first prog was pretty much standard, I've seen way too many dance songs with that chord prog. I like how you varied it at 2:00 though, good choice with that.
Drums: The only thing to address would be the bass drum, it's actually too deep for your average trance song. Everything else about the drums is pretty good though, I wouldn't say great though.
Good melodies though. And I also like the choice of synths in this song. At the end though, it becomes a little cluttered. Also, I would like you to bring out the synths a little better. They're pretty quiet, to be honest.
Sickening intro, I have to say.
And I would like you to use a bit more automation in your song, as well as LFO. You're excellent in melody and harmony, but in electronica, you need a little more than that.
So that finishes up my review. I leave you with a request to check out my stuff, preferably the more recent stuff, as that's all I really care about lol.